The Big Bad Wolf’s Little White Rabbit - Reviews

Writing Quality GoodStability of Updates GoodStory Development GoodCharacter Design GoodWorld Background Good..........................

Read up to 200 chaptersWriting Quality - Well-written novel that does not have many noticeable grammar mistakes. Dialogue between characters are good and have variety to them based on characteristics of the people speaking.Stability of Updates - New chapters look like they are being released in a consistent manner.Story Development - The novel's pacing is on the slower end but still remains enjoyable for the reader to follow the story of the main character as we learn and uncover the mysterious background he comes from. The novel steers away from some common troupes seen in other similar superhero novels and excels in telling a captivating story that has the reader anticipating for what is coming in the future.Character Design - Good character design ranging from the main protagonist to side characters in the academy. Characters are memorable and fleshed out with their own problems to deal with. I am looking forward to how you will develop them more in later chapters.World Background - The novel revolves around a society of people with superhuman abilities with a broad scope of abilities that are possible. Additional expansion of the existing world would be nice and introductions to organizations could be improved on.Overall, a decently well-written novel that I am looking forward to continuing at a later date. I hope that this novel gets more attention that it deserves and maintains the quality of writing it currently has right now.

Awesome story so far man. Pls continue. Can't stop thinking about how it will end.                                                            

Good                                                                                                                                             

The character's design are the good point in the novel. Exactly Noah and his siblings. It gave me a feeling that they will be a strong person in the future. After that, the background also not bad. I guess the world that author wrote  will be huge.

Ace, Aoi and the commanders were having lunch when Aoi asked that. His question almost makes my heart stop.

"What do you want?"

"Then this will become my partner." She looked at the distance where she see many Pillar Mountains standing tall, and large pieces of rocks floating nearby. The Mountains passed the clouds and went beyond it, almost unending when it had passed many layers of clouds.

Steven knew that was the voice of Remur and he brought his guard up. He also started to observe the slimes and caught sight of something. He saw that the blue slime had a stone like structure inside it while the red ones did not have it. Instantly he understood that the blue slime was most probably a level 1 Slime while the others were level zero.

Nie Hai had a serene and joyful expression on his face as he nodded at the couple. "That's indeed the case. Your son is in possession of an Indigo Soul Realm, one that is considered to be legendary amongst soul realms along with the Azure Soul Realm. Even Lord Ye Mo, Glory's City only Legend Rank Demon Spiritualist, only possesses a Cyan Soul Realm. Your son also managed to create his own cultivation technique after the one we taught him didn't allow him to progress. He rose his Soul Force to 62 in a year!"

Chapter 2: Education