The Big Bad Wolf’s Little White Rabbit

Writing Quality GoodStability of Updates GoodStory Development GoodCharacter Design GoodWorld Background Good..........................

Read up to 200 chaptersWriting Quality - Well-written novel that does not have many noticeable grammar mistakes. Dialogue between characters are good and have variety to them based on characteristics of the people speaking.Stability of Updates - New chapters look like they are being released in a consistent manner.Story Development - The novel's pacing is on the slower end but still remains enjoyable for the reader to follow the story of the main character as we learn and uncover the mysterious background he comes from. The novel steers away from some common troupes seen in other similar superhero novels and excels in telling a captivating story that has the reader anticipating for what is coming in the future.Character Design - Good character design ranging from the main protagonist to side characters in the academy. Characters are memorable and fleshed out with their own problems to deal with. I am looking forward to how you will develop them more in later chapters.World Background - The novel revolves around a society of people with superhuman abilities with a broad scope of abilities that are possible. Additional expansion of the existing world would be nice and introductions to organizations could be improved on.Overall, a decently well-written novel that I am looking forward to continuing at a later date. I hope that this novel gets more attention that it deserves and maintains the quality of writing it currently has right now.

Awesome story so far man. Pls continue. Can't stop thinking about how it will end.                                                            

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The character's design are the good point in the novel. Exactly Noah and his siblings. It gave me a feeling that they will be a strong person in the future. After that, the background also not bad. I guess the world that author wrote  will be huge.

Ace, Aoi and the commanders were having lunch when Aoi asked that. His question almost makes my heart stop.