The Bamboo Horse Alpha - Reviews

im loving the story so far...cant wait for the turn of events...i really like Leo though...

I've taken an interest to this coz of that synopsis. Hope it stays true to the synopsis and is a "discovering amazing things in this vast world and trying to understand the Dao" type of story.But if it derails into a typical "you dare look at my girl,....ok then DIE!!" or some power cultivating without any logic or mindless slaughtering of ancient clans just because of a useless "young master" offending the MC then...........I would be disappointed...

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The story is basically a Japanese novel with an op cringe protagonist. It is honestly fun to read something like this again... I'm honestly tired from all the cold ruthless op MCs that can even hold their character straight... c'mon are you a ruthless or just edgy as fk. The author has said in the summary what type of story its going to be so I dont get why people are bitching about it beeing as it was described.Now onto the story itself. There are 2 problems that I have with the story. First one is the grammar. It is honestly not bad as some of the reviews might make you believe... since I have seen bad grammar. From which you just loose brain cells and there is a ton of those types of novels. This one is very much readable and the mistakes are minor and easily fixable. The mistakes also happen maybe once to three times a chapter... so not that often. Second would be the MC. He is not terrible since I wouldn't have read 20ish chapters if he was... but you have to make him grow somehow. I like the fact that he is cheerful but it's really annoying at how idioticaly he acts sometimes. Get him a skill that will calm him down a little bit so he doesn't embarrass himself. Showing lustful expressions just makes him look like a creep and even though it is sometimes funny... his character will defenitly get stale pretty quickly. Keep it happy go lucky but please make him realise that he should take things a bit more seriously and get himself a bit of  a cool head (cool head in the terms that when he is excited he won't act like a kid and start shouting whooo! hoo! or accidentally make his mouth slip and stuff like that) Good Luck with your novel... though i think that the depressed "ruthless MC" loving audience on this website is not made for this novel. Sometimes I really see some of these comments and think if these people ever got some love in their lives? Like wtf...

I got bored idk why. I always yawn while reading this book. I'm quite surprised that the mc is naive at chapter 160+. Fucking dumbass and a hypocrite of a mc. And his "girlfriend" died and he is still the same.

Tucking it away he voiced out to the new figure as he got into a battle stance.

"Don't worry. Problems exist to be solved after all."

'What's the requirement?' Alodar wondered and decided to ask Neowalt.

(Talent: 1st level of Disaster Body)

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid

Wow wow wow... Keep up the good work... Very lovely the characters are great the strength and power are over willming... I can't wait for more... Thank you for this wonderful master piece ????????

The characters in The Dark Tempest are fascinating and well-developed! Each one has a unique personality and a meaningful evolution. I particularly appreciate ARASHI, whose journey is full of depth and emotions. The relationships between the characters are deep and natural, making the story even more immersive. You quickly become attached to them and want to see them grow through their trials. I can’t wait to discover the next part and see how they will evolve!