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Okay, let me start by explaining how I found the translation before I dive into the story itself. The translation was readable, which is definitely a step up from machine translations, but it still had its fair share of issues. Names were often misspelled, and if I hadn’t read a lot of Korean novels before, many cultural nuances and details would have been lost on me.
Now, onto the story itself... I think it’s decent for a casual read.
However, I have to say that the author seems quite inexperienced. Even as a hobby writer, I noticed a lot of rookie mistakes while reading. For instance, the author often spends too much time on unimportant details that are never mentioned again, just to emphasize how great the main character (MC) is.
Here are a couple of examples:
1. When the MC was a baby, there was a video of him eating and drinking baby food, which made other babies around his age, who were refusing to eat, become "hypnotized" to eat. This became a big deal, and a viewer even made a poll asking which age groups of babies were affected, up to about 20 months old. But this detail was completely useless. The poll discussion took up several paragraphs, which felt unnecessary.
2. Another memorable example is when the MC appeared in a famous movie for the first time. He used an ability to evoke pity because something very tragic happened to him. This made a lot of people leave the cinema in tears, and the movie gained more traction than expected. However, instead of focusing on the emotional impact, the author spent nearly a whole chapter discussing a YouTuber who analyzed the statistics of how many people cried during the film. Apparently, it was between 0-10%, and this detail was mentioned multiple times. There was also a challenge created because of this, either "how many times can you watch the movie without crying" or "how many films does it take you to stop crying." The translation made this part confusing, but it was excessively mentioned.
These kinds of irrelevant details are recurrent throughout the novel. On the other hand, important parts are often glossed over, mentioned in passing with very little clarification. This is a common mistake among inexperienced writers.
Now, for my personal opinion about the plot. Honestly, I knew what I was getting into, but I was still somewhat disappointed. I really didn’t like how the MC seems to put no effort into anything and just relies on his abilities. This wouldn’t be so bad if there were at least some psychological or emotional issues explored, but there’s nothing. It’s literally boring. While I understand that slice-of-life stories aren’t about action or drama, even the most mediocre ones have more suspense than this. Everything is so predictable that I can’t bring myself to continue reading. However, if you enjoy this type of story, it might not be a bad read. It just wasn’t my cup of tea.
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