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Overall not the best work. -----‐-----‐-----‐-----‐-----‐-----‐-----‐-----‐-----‐-----‐-----‐-----‐-----‐-----‐-----‐-----‐-----‐-----‐-----
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Yeah, I mean...... Yes? No?

This novel is really a fifty fifty. Kingdom building novel where the mc has the ability to teleport to one world to the other. Like the sypnosis said the mc will be given the city without having to pay tribute.

So that means he is independant basically. So MC uses modern items to trade for money and uses that to build his own city for now.

In the 40 chapters he already fought several wars, albeit lackluster explained it really shows mc's retardness. I mean, how the f*ck? This guy really thinks that if he equiped (only about 1 month?) trained soldiers with advanced weapons like crossbows and better quality swords and catapults he can defeat someone's seasoned soldiers with number advantage?

Oh guess what? Of course he won! Like he got confidence defeating unorgansized bandits he think he can win against well trained armies? Just because he has better equipment? What, even his soldiers can adapt into modern formations? (In one month and even less).

And there's no explanation how he even got his weapons from the modern world, no interaction with the modern world at all!

Oh, forgot to say he's a huge f*cking hypocrite, or you could say the author is one cuz in this world there exist demi-humans. So mc accepts refugees and there are demi-humans mixed in with them. Well, he says he will give them equal rights but no, the demi-humans apparantly got less than normal humans. Wow, you change your damn mind faster than I beat my meat!

Translation - 5* (Smooth like the hands in my freezer~)
SoU - 5* (trial reads, always 5 stars)
Story development - 3* (I don;t know how to explain this, read it yourself)
Character design - 1* (Overconfident mc with retarded thinking)
World background - 3* (demi-humans and medieval technology/era)

Overall score 3.4
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Some people may like it but most of people especially old readers will hate it especially if they read other kingdom building novel.

I suggest if you don't want to lose your brain cell then don't read it.

other world has 0 background.
IDK how the **** MC buy sword crossbow and guns in morden era? There are 0 info or interaction with other world
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'system that allows him to transmigrate freely between 21st century Earth and another world that resembles the era of the west during the early Cold Wa"
Ya leí demasiadas veces este argumento.
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It's actually funny to see that complete trash has better ratings than this average story. Let's try to give real reviews? No. Let's cry about certain tag or petition shit.
Ok. Let's start with review.
This story is actually average story about transmigration. This time, MC can come back to his previous world in any moment.
It's not masterpiece or something but if you don't have anything to read. Story is fine. There are some unique parts about this novel. It gives off feel typical Japanese light novel though.
I am not really sure if its source of webcomics. I will check later.
Translation quality(5/5 - I read fast so, I might automatically skip minor mistakes.) Stability of updates(5/5 - This part is pointless for trial read.)
Story development(Solid 3/5 - It isn't brilliant or something.)
Character design/development(2/5 - Some characters are 1 dimensional)
World background(2/5 - Author put some thoughts into those cities. It's still more work than 90% of modern novels in trial read. Copy, Paste, Done.)
At least try first 19 chapters or so, don't be retard and rate 1 without reading.
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A good story about world development despite the plot being over done in many novels on this site. Too bad the author took a break, but it's worthy reading.
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Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
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Ughhh another system novel. Ah shit here we go again.

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This book was bad to put it simply i got to chapter 20 before i stopped .you can tell from how it starts that it going to be bad the mc is just plain stupid.
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Hope it would be good till now only four novel of Same genere let me to pay money and time reading them
(Lord empire,world online,sword of dawn breaker and release that witch)
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petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
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Finally  kingdom/Settlement building novel. At first look it seem promising. Reading in now and so far it is good. Will update later when read completely.

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