Starting With a City as a Transmigrator - Reviews

I’m not sure how this is so highly rated (4.4) at the time of writing this review.

Readers’ standards just keep going down and down I guess.

This novel is written by an author with the maximum level of ignorance possible. It makes for a laughable reading experience.

The irony of it all is quite great.

Good luck to those who take the plunge despite my advice not to.

Petition to bring back World's Best Martial Artist and a couple of others..................................................................................................................
Don't blame me for low rating, they will either not pick this novel at all or drop it midway anyway.

The sheer impracticality and stupidity of the MC is bordering wishy washy naive thoughts. The story isn't good and too fast paced with cardboard characters. The story has no flow at all it's just jumps around from one thing to the next to force push the plot and make the pacing more fast. Not recommended for those interested in well thought out stories.

I had hoped for more, I like city/kingdom building novels in general and it is my favorite genre to read.
I have read the first 10 chapters, it is kind of... bland... it just doesnt catch my attention. I might force myself to read the free chapters, and I rly hope it gets better.

My biggest disappointment is the fact that his trip to the real world was not described. He just goes and comes back with a bunch of stuff... no talk about how he acquired them or anything.
I mean let's be real... how will you get shotguns in China? it's not like he whipped them out of his arse.
Same with swords and bows & arrows.

No talk about how he acquired anything really... I would have really liked to see his trip as he meets the people that he does and sells them some stuff. (trip as in before he cured the kid and got scammed)
When he came to the city.
He didn't personally do much... or it was not described.
He would just hand the papers to someone else to handle... I get that it is realistic since I would delegate work like that too if I was in the same situation... but at least tell us the path of him researching how to make a proper water wheel or something. Like a paragraph or two was enough.

The chapters are short and there are some inconsistencies when it comes to either translation or maybe the author just doesnt know what he is writing.

I will probably read the free chapters and update my review based on that... but for now I have read 25% of what I can read and I'm not impressed. Especially if I have to pay or use free-passes to read the rest.

I've been known to ignore plot holes, as long as the other factors are good enough, but even I cannot stretch disbelief this far. The details are so lacking I feel giving the world background one star is giving it too much credit.

Honestly, I was looking forward to reading this novel and it greatly disappointed me.

You're thrown right into the book without any introduction or build up. Theres practice no logic. like how did he end up meeting the Duke? how does he buy weapons and arms from earth? (no description or story of the actual earth)

MC is really concieted and quite stupid.

if you want something that has actual sense and world devotion read empress gigglo (Mc has the power to transfer between world and uses it to improve that worlds civilisation)

waite a minit wasent the Cold war after WWII so how is this world similar to that tis is more like the Middle Ages form Europe than the cold War era. I think the author needs to correct that.

oooh boy, this is poorly written with Ok translation. If you want something brainless to pass time this will work. If you are looking for a proper city builder skip this story.

There is little reason or logic to much of what occurs. All the characters including MC are very flat and 2D. Every simple action the MC makes gets praised as genius ....