She Dominates the Immortal Realm with Her HP Bar - Reviews

The story is rather promising but please before you continue writing your chapters overwork your former ones. Correct wrong written words and your gramma.There are on mass of free online tools who would help you improve the quality.

    I would recommend this book it is great. Once you start reading you cant stop. Its a real page turner. The auther has an amazing talent.

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Best novel in a long time.  I am waiting for the next chapter. The author has you at the edge of your seat.  You feel like you are part of the story

I like the premise of Save State. It gives room for a lot of experimenting with different Timelines. I have only read two chapters so far but I do enjoy the concept.Problems? Make sure to edit. Swear or don't. Character Design is flat for now. Very Dialogue heavy. Maybe I will read more later but Grammer mistakes are a pet peeve of mine.

Lets faking goooo,. It's a good translation. Keep this quality of work and keep the chapters rolling,?

The title should be "a couples ordinary dog food.." ? So cute ?? *ultimate fan girl mode.* ?? I don't mind more dog food scenes ? ?

"The two women passby to them and his boss again look to one of the women. And they heared what they are talking"

However, the royal academy allowed disciples to shape their cultivation according to their talents. That was why they had less stringent requirement than sects. Elemental affinity test was just a tool to discover the more efficient path for disciples to take, not to weed out unsuitable recruits. As such, early cultivation in the royal academy was taught as broadly as possible, prioritizing choices over efficiency.

"Well it's all thanks to Mistress. But, she wanted to talk to you first" said Mayu

After all, they're ninja.

Next morning JK woke up with voices calling him. It was the members. Everybody cheered him and kind of made him forgot about Y/N. JK was happy and having a good time. After completing their breakfast seven of them went out for hiking and shopping stuff. Time passed and it was afternoon. They went to a restaurant and the waitress asked them for order.