She Dominates the Immortal Realm with Her HP Bar - Reviews

slowly slowly I depply. love with my Vani.

As we get out of the truck, a guy approached us. He's almost as tall as General Barredo and he looks like he's in this early 30s. No beard though, only a mustache.

Zach simply nodded his head, he pulled out a chair beside Alexa patiently waiting for them to continue there chat.

Somebody once asked could I spare some change for gas?

Well the years start coming and they don't stop coming

A punch suddenly hit Koro on the side making him be thrown back a great distance, a chunk of his side fully caved in. When he looked to see who did it he saw another one of those monstrosities, the shrimp. His claw was not made for cutting anything, it barely even opened to be fair, but it was unimportant in face of the capacity that he had. The shrimp monstrosity had a punch that could compare to a missile in impact power and the light energy circulating those claws could accelerate his punching speed even further.

Read up to Ch35 and I still did not feel invested whatsoever and found everything boring. The author tries to shove some psychological damage nonsense down your throat for about 10 chapters straight and I just didn't care. You get barely introduced to about 10 different characters and then are supposed to care about something that happened to the MC 20 years ago that just takes away from the main story progression. The story progression so far is him just coming up with random stuff from a 10 year old and everyone falls prey to the classic "just trust me bro". The only sort of knowledge I have about how the world and powers is from a info dump chapter that resembles a college students notes and doesn't flow well at all.Thanks for reading

Good writing, but first chapter was kinda boring, the premise is very unique. I still don't have strong feelings about the main character but. So far everything is still good ?

I am reading this because the other work of the autor. I'm feeling a bit disapointed because the character of the FL. I'm waiting of the development of her and to be smarter

it's a good story to read and I promise you that you won't regret it

Pertamax ??? Thanks for the Books!!!!! ? ??Oh, nobody have given a review for this yet? Let me be the first to give all five stars for all five categories for your new book ????? We are all looking forward for the next chapters ???