Average translation, horrible editing. In specific, the capitalization, uniformity, text spacing was terrible. The stat screen and all of the ‘system’ stuff was just a mess to look at.
The author can’t do simple arithmetic (what’s new), the novel is underwhelming, and for someone who knows hardly anything about DND, this novel just seemed like a bunch of gibberish.
The TL says that anyone can enjoy it regulars less of whether they know DND or not, but it’s clearly not the case. Most of the text is just info drops or assumes you know DND knowledge.
I don’t feel like spending my time writing a more thorough review for such an underwhelming novel.
tl;dr: terrible novel for non-DND enthusiasts (probably still bad for DND enthusiasts because the author/TL got fundamental DND stuff wrong according to commenters)
