Shadows of the Black Eagle - Reviews

decent!! this novel need a editor, if you read it as is then its like reading from google translate. Which so annoying and make your eyes suffer...

I haven’ read that far but the kid is crippled it doesn’ t fix when he goes into vr he gets trampled on the story is not going good

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The story had a good premise but the author drags out a single fight scene over about 10 chapters and then it's going on about the reactions of people to the fight in another 10 chapters. The story isn't progressing at all and its literally the same plot point said over and over from different points of view broken down but in a totally useless way.

Sorry guy I did not write that much. I am not going to make excuses. I F*** up. why does this sound like I am in a relationship. Well anyways guy enjoyed that short a** chapter. Better luck next time. I will write more next time. seeya

( CONGRATULATIONS TO HOST FOR BREAKING THROUGH TO SPIRIT LEADER IN SPIRIT EYES HOST HAS BEEN GRANTED A SPIRIT HALO BUT DUE TO THE CIRCUMSTANCES OF HOST THE HALO HAS BEEN DIRECTLY ABSORBED AND GRANTED A NEW SPIRIT ABILITY AS WELL AS ACCESS TO THE SHOP )

"Kamu ini apa-apaan!!

Perhaps, she is aroused by being treated like a dog

Lucius seemed to be too good at glaring, Draco realized, when he looked down. "If you don't shut that nasty mouth of yours, I'll shut it," He said, touching his wand. The little boy knew that the wand did weird things, and he knew a few spells from hearing them so often. He shuddered, knowing that the wand could probably do amazing and horrible things. Draco was already way too silent and mature for a five-year old. But he knew that he daren't make his father angry.

Ashley grabs the collar, pulls it apart and throws it to the ground. Ashley says, "Thank you Luis, now let's go."

(How in the actual fuck can a parent talk about their own child like that especially a pure innocent little shit like shorty)

His first class was Urban Survival, taught by a Japanese cat girl, a nekomimi.   Her favorite saying was "Be good, or don't get caught."   She didn't tolerate tardiness, but Lucas couldn't help it—watching Ravyn leave had given him a hard-on he didn't want to display to the whole class.