reborn in Usotsuki lily fan-fic - Reviews

I liked how the author paced the story. This is the one thing that is hard to see in the many stories here in Webnovels. Things are flowing smoothly and the events shift properly. it's not all over the place unlike some of the stories I had read. The narration and dialogues used was not forced and it gave life to the characters. I look forward to seeing more of this wonderful novel. More power to the Author.

The chapters are the longest of any story in Quidian I've seen so far!  I like that!  So far the story is great and I'm into it!  Also I haven't noticed being annoyed by bad grammar so the translation is among the best on this site.

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روايه رائعه جدا اتمنى ان تستمر في تحديث الفصول دائما ولا تسقطها تعجبني جيانَ نينغ جدا انه حذر من أجل مصلحته ولكن أيضا ليس جبانا بحيث يفوت الفرص لرفع قوته يستغل الفرص التي تاتيه دايما ومع ذلك فهو عقلاني

Is thare Romance..? in this story.? anything.? Seggs.? love.? other things.?

Hui Yin looked at Jiang Xu and reached out to straighten his tousled hair. Jiang Xu obligingly leaned his head closer so that she didn't have to strain her arm.

        World of demon,

"The end of the world is coming. It's the apocalypse. Prepare yourselves!," a short chubby young man was shouting out repeatedly while walking down the halls of Misty Hills High School.

"My name is Justin, and what do you think you're going to do to these kids." Justin says staring at John

Character Development: 10/10

He had enough gold coins to aquire the property. He would need to set up a training area, and that wouldn't be a problem. After reaching level 20 with Instant Dungeon, he could now stick an ID in a place, and leave it there. He could access it at any time, and even set up a door for entrance and exit. He could go into a broom closet, create an empty ID there, and use the door of the closet as the entrance of the ID. The ladies would have their private area for training.

hearing this Jack looked back at the painting but couldn't find any amiss. he looked at Eva when Eva pointed at left hand of girl in painting. Jack looked at painting and opened his mouth wide with shock. he looked at Eva and said -"it is... it's a....... dagger. "