Reborn-I wasted my previous life so that much change - Reviews

The narrative of the story is very intriguing, creating a lot of mystery and drawing the reader in for more, I have to admit I didn't expect the story to start how it did, but I'm really glad I continued reading to find out more about Ryan.

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I had to stop after chapter 5. By then MC was a totally a idiot. What broke it for me was MC goes to his job after not calling in for about 3-4 days not getting fired there? So MC goes into room to clean but instead eats an drinks the wine meant for someone else? That is just there to cause conflict. That's why I stop forcing plot isn't the way to write a good story.

Honestly I love this novel and I think there should be even more. My boss caught me reading this at work and yelled at me but after I told him what novel he was he even gave me a break to continue

I disliked him back in time, I would like him to lose his whole family because family is just a burden ... @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@

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I would recommend author of this story attemtp writing this story again after growing up a little bit, cause it really looks like kid writing doctors degree philosophy research after reading one from internet. The mc has no logic in his actions. I would expect some expert style moveset from mc that can play around with police by refueling his bike on high speed and shooting down a copter easily but then he acts like 8 year old moron (kids act more logical than this mc). Out of logic parts is about whom adress his hatred, not understanding the "will

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Overall, it's a 5 star imo, the worldbuilding is nice and the first chapter sets a tone for the rest of the story, the characters are fleshed out and have their own personalities, the only problem I had was the grammar which can be easily fixed

first of all I find this story absolutely refreshing and very good read. the story is about a guy who's working very hard to support his family after his father went missing ,he tried very hard to keep things together even dropping out of school doing menial jobs as a potter and such which is considered a absolutely dangerous task in such a dungeon crawling world though MC'S father is involved in a huge conspiracy (at least I think so as author is very mysterious about it) then in one such job he gets a legacy (read to find out what that is) and he did what he does best trying to keep things together. overall this is a very interesting read full of twist and suspens .

Kuro rudely cut through Shiro's explanation to boast about himself in front of Hana while flailing his lower tail. He was hovering beside Hana while flapping his tiny maroon-colored wings. Hana secretly found that his action was very endearing and adorable.