Reborn-I wasted my previous life so that much change - Reviews

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Stretching my new body around, I take in a deep breath before shouting,

His lips were close to her ear now, a playful nibble along the lobe causing her to shudder violently. "Lulling them, as you have just experienced, though it is not in effect now. Under these spells pain turns to pleasure..." His hand cupping her breast moved to slip underneath the fabric of her dress, his fingers finding the hard nub of her nipple and giving it a firm pinch that made her whole body arch suddenly in his arms. "...fear to euphoria."

You just need to give the Human body information about how to kill the virus.

Following a soft exclamation, Shi Jieyi's body suddenly turned soft. She laid in the boy's embrace, coiling her legs around his waist with force, drenching it with the love fluids dripping down her buttocks. She sat there face to face in his hug and looked into his eyes which seemed to tease her directly for a short while before nestling her head beside her neck. After some time, she noticed that the boy wasn't showing any movement. His member was still inside her vagina and made her feel a heart jabbing pain which brought her discomfort.

Okay the last story is "Unseen World"

This novel started off really well, even the world and character building is pretty good. After he went to the five element world the second time, this novel's down fall started. The amount fillers is insane, it put even MGA to shame. This is the first novel I have read where the MC is still stuck in the impoverished starting place even at chapter 600. MC faces no setbacks for his idiotic decisions. I think his life spirit should have died when it got kidnapped to sparrows village. Certain places the MC should be there and not in training like during the mercenary guild meeting all the powers. Author needs to improve his creativity. Currently this novel is mediocre at best and will frustrate you most of the time. Only time will tell if it gets back to its best.

A very different approach from most Naruto fanfics, instead of following the standard and more comfortable path with the Konoha setting, the author was more innovative and decided on Kirigakure. And so far I say it's one of the best fanfics of the genre I've read,  Unlike most, the choice for slow progression is very well used to introduce us to the world and focus on the characters so that we can care about them. Because of this point, every event that involves them is truly significant to us. So I highly recommend this story if you want to read about a living world where the characters don't revolve around the protagonist, where events have weight and leave you with an eagerness for what the future has in store for our little Ren, start reading now!

i just came for the free FP given for the review