PRETTY LITTLE THIEF - Reviews

This novel started off very good where the MC was part of a city where everyone got teleported to a new world and they had to survive altogether. The city ultimately got overrun but MC went back in time  and received an ability to upgrade himself through contribution points from changing the future. But then, two major flaws appeared as the chapter count got higher.1) Instead of focusing on growing stronger, the author decided to go all investigation of this and that, causing the novel to move sideways. Writing filler arcs are fine, but it's not fine when it goes on for 50 chapters.2) The author keeps throwing wikipedia info dumps whenever he/she can. Like our MC would slice apart a bus to throw the metal at monsters. But before he actually throws, there would be a paragraph on how the bus was made and what type of materials were used. And this happens constantly and becomes annoying as the story progresses.Those two things completely lowered the quality of this novel but I still recommend a try.

it was a lovely read honestly, refreshing and even though it sounds as the apex of a cliche it's actually quite original in the use of those concepts, loved it all the way anf I would recommend it to anyone who's wondering.

You should trust the author's review. Even though the novel has a slow pace, but the quality of the story, character, and the plot will never make you disappoint. If you search for the second chance novel with clever MC, you will fall in love with this novel.This author really need to be blamed for addicting others with his novel.

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Amazing story, that's all I can say. it flows well, it's funny from time to time, and also it's light to read. there's no system here, so a plus point to this book.

I tried to justify giving this more stars, but i can't bring myself to. I will detail on this below.The quality of the writing is very poor, with words that are misstyped and mismatched that ruin the context.Characters don't stay in character and move from one attitude to the next, without any justification for the transition.The dialogues are poorly matched to the atmosphere and toopic, often using formal speech poorly, thus ruining the immersion. There are decent things as well, such as the world building, the theme and relationships, but too many things were copied from Culti online that it does not seem original.Same MC name, Same dragon name, Similar physique, same power system so far. It's just hard to apreciate something unoriginal that seems like a cheap copy.Coming back to the bad points, this novel could use a full rewrite and edit. Too many mistakes to recover by this point.

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He turned to me with an eyebrow raised. "What about?" He asked with his arms crossed.

"J-John. You! You scared me half to death!" She wiggled out of his grip and started beating his chest. He didn't let it show but her seemingly weak hits felt like he was taking bricks to his chest at least in their weight. He had experience with that feeling but that didn't mater now because despite the strikes hurting a bit they didn't do much damage. He puffed his chest and said.

So would you mind adjusting the font size till the line below fits your screen?

"You are Federation…" he said as he collapses to the floor "Oh… Oh… Sorry… I…"