PRETTY LITTLE THIEF - Reviews

All that glitters is gold

Three hours later, the plane's wheels slid onto the runway, putting on complete stop five minutes later.

"Hahaha! You have come!" Harp laughed maniacally. With a club on his hands, he looked somewhat cool

9 chapters in.... its pretty good. Like how open ended the world is and how vast it could turn out. It's pretty clear that this will be a long long story considering chapter length, synopsis, and the setting along with the world building thus far, looking forward for the rest

Great light reading. Good job ?? Hope to see more of your work

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the story is mostly enjoyable. there's a few lines especially from mc that i find cringe or even completely disconnected from the situation. the battles are nice and interesting. unfortunately so far the uh... hornier side of the story hasn't really been prominent (c27) though to be fair with the current plot it would be shoe horned in. hoping he gets good relationship with elora, and even if she is a weaker character author finds way to keep relevant. nix is best dragon.

should try a little harder to write and get some inspiration

World building good, flaw is good, pacing a bit slow at first but still can savor, the character building good; however, the book itself is still ongoing, I need to see further how  it will go. Pacing, great overall is good. A little tweaks on a grammar, and a bit cleansing to the unccessary words in dialogue and paragraph, all will be smooth to go. The story itself is interesting, the start was a very simple yet full of life, the first character who enter the scene, relate me much immediately, ??overall, I highly recommend this story.