Portals to evolution - Reviews

I like how this novel started just wish there was a little prelude to make it more exciting. Still hope the authors keeps it up! It seems very well thought out, researched, and close to the authors heart!  Just wish there was something more in the beginning to bite into, but it still is very interesting!

Good morning and I hope you are having a great time in the universe to surpass the universe in becoming a true God and traveling the world to the world of Ertera and the world of Ertera and how you can be a good friend to you and your family and your family is a great place to work and to be able to enjoy your life.All of that was me clicking the word memory thing on me phone. Anyways good novel with potential!!

A nice well-written story with a good writing quality that will entertain anyone who read it and you won't find many mistakes, I advice the author to get contracted soon so this work reach out to more people this book has a lot of potential and it's getting wasted by not getting contracted.

MC ruined it for me. Don't want to spoil anything, but this novel is not worth reading even as a trial read. Already deleted previous review since some people might say I'm too serious or overreacting.

Dear author, I like your novels... I have also read your other novels previously and am eagerly waiting for an chapter update... Though i have not seen you update any other novels in the past few months I really hope you take this novel to the other level and continue publishing new chapters.

Is this an mtl or by is it translated by someone.                                                                                                                    

the writing was good overall. Just dont like the plot and the MC. Dont get me wrong its just matter of preference.

I'm such a fan of this series. The first part had me guessing the whole time, and I was still wrong. Just the right amount of noir detective mixed with sci fi and some cool supernatural aspects. I can't wait for the next adventure!

its like a kid going into hyperactive mode because he ate too many sweets the story is interesting but the emoticons are really hard on the eyes like really, really , really annoying!! , good luck with the writing but just please turn it down a bit on emojis and don't jump from one thing to another rapidly just take it slow (the p.o.v I mean) focus on one thing at a time

    "It's called levitating. I can do this by manipulating the energy around me and forcing the air to collect under the barbell, where I can make it rise and fall if I wished. But hey, this isn't the weirdest thing right now." He spread his other hand around the room, and I could see that he was in fact true.

Thank you for making this story and so far I think it's good

Pretty good start. Interesting premise. I like that the mc will have magic and physical prowess. Also realistic that after two years he can only produce a small fireball, I like that. We'll have to see where this goes.