Portals to evolution - Reviews

The ethereal figure glanced at Enzo before walking over to him.

"I am. But, I am not from your kind of noble here. I am from a faraway place. I am not from around here. Will it be a problem if I am a noble? Do pirates' world don't allow noble to interact with them?" Aoi said in worry.

Xyrus:Eto?(tukoy nito sa sunglass)madumi na to dahil hinawakan mo na at dahil madumi na sisirain ko na(tinapakan niya ito hanggang sa madurog)

Zephyr bowed at Lau, "I thank you for hearing my request since Lovell was busy yesterday."

"Hmph…. I didn't cook for two hours just so you could eat it early! Go sit down at the table, and I…. I will call them for you…."

Sarah : there are about 4 expert class beasts, to which you will handle.  do not be complacent,  any wrong move could cost you your life.

"W-what?! Please no, my family live in that city! I can't do this!" Yelled the injured man hysterically

Fujiko F. Fujio

Never! Never! Never!  Never! Never!

This story has me totally invested, I really like the portrayal of mental illnesses, the background is really great, and even if the MC doesn’t really talk, you can still understand him and I think that is really great. The only mistakes I have noticed is just a few words one word before/after where they should be, and one where the wrong form of word was used, overall this story is really great and has good potential!

Is this the original plot of the story because the original story does not contain anyone's pov apart from Jay Jay. Chapter 261 till 275 is Jay Jays pov and here it is something else. Is this a fanfic or original story.The story you wrote is awesome but is it a fanfiction or original, I am confused. Please help me