Short Review :- If you are thinking whether to read this novel or not, my simple answer will be, yes. You should definitely read this webnovel, although this novel has many flaws and is inconsistent in many departments but when it comes to story and character department this novel might be the best available on this website. But I must warn you, grammar and spelling are worst possible. I will recommend you read this after reading some of other xianxia (Chinese cultivation novels) novels. Some recommendations are Renegade Immortal, I shall seal the heavens, Revered Insanity, etc. After reading some of the xianxia novels, you will find this more entertaining, different and good. Long Review :-Goods:-1. Story :- This has one of the most fast paced story lines. Story is good but is very inconsistent, some events are shown very slowly, where they almost become boring and some are shown very quickly where we expected it to be explored some more. Although this is not a deal breaker and we can still enjoy the novel but its just something that author can improve on.2. Characters :- Characters are very well written, every character is 3 dimensional with different personalities, motives, goals and backstories. Main Character is one of the best, he is neither a goody-2-shoes nor downright psychopath, he is gray.3. Plot Holes :- Almost none.4. Fights :- Well written and choreographed. Short and sweet.5. Concept :- Different from norm and well executed.6. Very addictive and hard to put down, it retains our attention through its fast paced story, interesting plot, good character interactions, some mysteries and other good aspects instead of cliffhangers.Bads :-1. Grammar and spelling:- Only thing I hate about this novel. It is just bad no arguments. I myself am not a native English speaker but the mistakes are just hard to swallow. They can easily be correct with autocorrect or grammerly or a editor. Initially I was not having that much issues with it because atleast the story was understandble but further down the story where things become complicated, I was not understanding the story itself. Please author I beg of you do something about it.2. Too much info dump during the history lessons regarding previous Great Emperor. And too many Great Emperors. Doesn't bother me that much but mentioning it regardless.Thank You Author LazySageDao for this amazing story, and keep it up. I may not be able to send you gifts but I have bought everyone of your chapters till the latest and will continue to. As to thank you for giving me a chance to experience this story I will try my best to recommend other people to read your novel via online and offline. I have never wrote a review before and might bever write after this but I took this opportunity because I was genuinely satisfied by your story and wanted to tell other peoples about its goods and bads as well as tell the author to do something about his writing mistakes. If I have written something wrongly, please forgive me as I am new to this.
