My sister's crush - Reviews

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Jen lowered the weapon.  "Why?"

I look at two shady men. they pass each other a glance before they look at me. "want something punk?" the person I'm going to call Fuck Head, said to me. "careful, you might run into this if you run,  dude". This man I'll call Shit Smear, said while pulling out a switch blade. Fucking aborted mistakes, I thought. "Would you kindly move out of the way" I said with a snarky smile. "Fucking bitch" he said with a face I wished I could have saw, before I smashed it. All the while, Shit Smear with the switch blade swung down on my back, cutting into something important. I fall and writhe in pain. Shit Smear and Fuck Face realized what they've done, fled. I'm fading in consciousness, blood is gushing out, a crimson red river flows. I died

Well, this one I believe have the same genre as stellar transformation. I don't know. But the story so far have been interesting. Might just read it more later when it has more chapter. Highly recommend it though.

Nice story, the pacing is just right, not too fast and not too slow either.the Mc's abilities are overpowered but stay within reason. they are also fun to play with. though when he got that nerve control skill I wonder why he never thought about increasing his reaction speed or even his perception of time, that would've been OP. all in all, it's a good read for a Naruto fanfic. keep it up!

of you want your fill on fluff, read this novel! I'm looking forward to the conclusion but I'm happy with the journey to this point! thank you author and bless you!

Just the kind of story I was looking for. Thank you so much author. I really like the way they met. In truth, I've only read upto the fifth chapter, but I'd like to take my time with this.