Mages of war-war and magic - Reviews

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Just from the 3 initial description chapters, I can guess that you have it all planned and prepared.At least most of it!So no worries about it getting dropped right!That's what readers expect most from new original novels.It is very Interesting. I didn't find any small mistakes.Good luck!Keep going!

Great book, I love it! This story has a lot of potential

Good concept,  I don't see many new Cultivation novels nowadays let alone phone systems, Keep up the good work. Cultivation shall revive

"Do you have any experience of taking care of kids?"

The merchants seemed confused at first, as Lucius uttered those words and turned the jewelry around, looking at it from every angle until it dawned on him that he was analyzing the item with a skill or spell.

Zack was in shock! He said no because she is only new here and she doesn't know what to do exactly. Molly refused. She was begging him to help Molly but Zack wasn't convinced at all.

It depended on the strength of magic or curses. If they were stronger than the magic of the sword, it would be cancelled and the sword would be normal again. Thus the curse could be lifted temporarily. Nevertheless, it was still possible to fight with it normally.

"Denzel!" General Barredo said as he approached me "Good work, son. Raikov's safely onboard that train"

' What is wrong with this thing it just keeps staring' - Caleb

The answer came from Will the other Mages voice "Elena, we have to first finish of the henchmen before we can help Gary. You should know that until these small fries do not die, we will not survive the ordeal. Gary is right; we need to finish them off before supporting them."

No matter what he do, there's no way he can win this pointless fight.