Mages of war-war and magic

Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.

Just from the 3 initial description chapters, I can guess that you have it all planned and prepared.At least most of it!So no worries about it getting dropped right!That's what readers expect most from new original novels.It is very Interesting. I didn't find any small mistakes.Good luck!Keep going!

Great book, I love it! This story has a lot of potential

Good concept,  I don't see many new Cultivation novels nowadays let alone phone systems, Keep up the good work. Cultivation shall revive

"Do you have any experience of taking care of kids?"

The merchants seemed confused at first, as Lucius uttered those words and turned the jewelry around, looking at it from every angle until it dawned on him that he was analyzing the item with a skill or spell.