Lustful Employee - Reviews

The start is dynamic and attractive, while usually, the norm is to write in the past tense author had chosen to use present but it's not a bad thing per se. Character design is unique and genuine in my opinion.there is no information dumping and the story flows appropriately which is good. Updates are stable enough that readers don't have to wait. the only flaw I found in the narration is that it is tough to read conversations because there is no gap between them and it leads to confusion about who is saying what and which part is said and which part is not. I think it can be corrected easily so it's not a big issue. good luck for the author.

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Is there in¢est? I apogolize for asking this question in a review, but someone else asked this as well, and you didn’t really give a clear answer…

This is what I hoped all system/gacha stories should aspire towards. Fantastic worldbuilding where the author fleshes out the meat behind the summoning system and the lives of the gacha characters within. Even the world seems like it could make sense in a gacha game. The main character and the side character have been super interesting too.

The story is well written and the MC is well developed. If you can get past the first 3 chapters, its smooth reading from there. R-18 chapters are there, but aren't shoved down your throat excessively. Probably wasting a power stone here seeing as it looks like the author has dropped it, but it'll stay in my library just in case.

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I have mixed feelings about the writing, I am on ch 9 and I don't think I understand half of everything I read, because although it looks like good grammar it is deceptively bad, it's structured weird and mistakes are in places where if you read out loud its just wrong, I can't gloss over mistakes in writing, I'm not that kind of reader, the dialogue and quips mc says most of the time I have to read 6 times over to make sure I understood what he was saying, but other than that every character I've seen has a distinct personality, the world although not told in much detail, is very big, and things seem to be happening though I don't understand it

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it is pretty good.................................it is pretty good.................................it is pretty good.................................

keep doing more please don't ever drop I couldn't stop reading the second I started

Riya wasn't aware of anything happening last night.

"Uhh, could you tell me where the bathroom is? I need to speak to the mage trainer. It's urgent."John said quickly. "Please. It'll only be a few minutes. Besides, the mage trainer will be in there much longer, won't he? So please, just allow me a few minutes."