"Sure thing, honey. Sorry, girls, I'll be back." he says, rising and following me to the master bedroom. As I close the door, I turn towards him and ask Cassie to set up a telepathic link to talk without outside ears.
So far, this is a good start and a fun read so far. The characters seem to have their own personalities and are not robotic. This is an early review since not enough chapters or world information to go on yet. I plan to update this in the future once it gets further along. So far a worthy pick up! Needs more updates ?
I am blown away by the world-building. I love how you have set the pace and in each chapter we discover new powers and beings. The story development is intriguing enough for me to want to read more. Congratulations Author, Job well done. You have created a masterpiece!!!
