Love In The Forbidden City (Completed) - Reviews

Fun and exciting to read! Look forward more chapters ...

It's not bad, but it's not good either. Honestly, it's not that enjoying to read and kinda becomes of a chore coz there's something off that I can't point out. Like it feels the story is kinda stiff. The world background is also kinda weird since it feels like Korean, with Western and other Asian vibes. I wouldn't usually mind this but it needs proper development, or maybe it's just a translation problem if ever. I don't know what's the plan with the "System" but if it's only for the so-called psuedo-omnipotent "Guidance

nunca tive tanta raiva numa novel quanto essa até que tinha um plano de fundo legal mas o autor fez um MC muito bosta a tradução péssima ?

I really like the plot of the whole story. Makes one want to continue reading... The character development is fun to read as well... Overall a good book

So far (ch 26) it is amazing. First time an Mc has been true to himself in front of women. This is one of the few novels where women can't force the self into the mc's life.Good world, good story and nice character design and development (like a daughter changing how Mc behaves, or how he can fake liking Sophie, yet hate her behavior internally)

Pretty good book. A guy gets a cheat in a game that allows him to chat with monsters, a unique idea amongst all the other generic cultivation books on Webnovel. But unlike other novels of the same genre where the npc’s seem like real people and don’t know that they are in a game, the npc’s in this novel are aware of things like stats, exp, levels, and the system.

The title is a little misleading....i read with the expectation of something along the lines of a litrpg and discovered an apocalyptic cultivation novel .... not to say that this book isnt good it actually is surprisingly well written..overall definitely worth giving a shot

the story progressed fine at first, then it became a sorrowful pity party of unfulfilled threats and failed urgency that has the slow burn of a middle school fight. I like the story but I have read at least 8 chapters of petty squabbling, abuse, pointless fevers, and situations that could have been better if more communication and trust was shown instead of naivety.

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This book is fantastic!I've only read through the first 12 chapters, but I can already tell that its got lots of potential. The story is a very interesting take on quite a "cliche" idea. It isn't your typical 'generic' plot line where the one-sided MC aimlessly uses his powers in his quest for 'revenge' and manages to succeed at everything he tries.Instead, the author creates a realistic and broken MC, whose character development is some of the best I've ever seen. As I read the story, the descriptive imagery and heartfelt language drew me into the character's shoes. I felt deeply immersed in the MC's emotional ups and downs. The story felt real. At the same time, the plot line continued to intrigue me as I read. While the pacing begins quite slow, the author adds small details that create suspense and also give the opportunity for the plot line to go in many different directions.I'm really looking forward to see where this story will head. Keep up the great work Author!

Dropped after around 30 chapters. It's just like, everything about this is so generic, every single character just has a template personality. literally Sadistic fighter, Tough cop, Grumpy teenager, and cute little sister. He can't kill anyone if it's not for money cause then he won't be the ideal assassin his little sister wanted him to be which is just beyond me. It's so stupid and he's not even an assassin anymore as in he's not a pro, he has no 'customers' and it honestly feels like something that's purely meant to increase the word count.  MC hardly bothers hiding his abilities, numerous people already know his identity and capabilities and even his gym trainer knows something is weird with him. The cultivation system is nonexistent, there is mana, inner energy, and spells. For some unknown reason, he feels that he should learn how to harness that inner energy although it's apparently less pure than the mana he already uses. TL: DR - Cringe lines, non-existent combat system. Wouldn't recommend it to anyone interested in anything beyond a children's show level of plot.