Love In The Forbidden City (Completed) - Reviews

"You're going to die. But You will be happy, so don't worry about it, yeah!" he continues while smiled innocently at Ace.

"It was all for you! I hope you liked it." And she continued to hug me. She might have a weird way of expressing her feelings but I totally got it.

Marupok.

Title: Hero, World Traveler, Not Enough

Lolita will always know.

Occupation: None

We landed on the planet in minutes, copper colored temples that shared similarities with the Egyptians and Greeks spread all around us, tens of thousands of green skinned people walked around with weapons, both cold weapons and blasters, even the kids had their own weapons.

Somebody once asked could I spare some change for gas?

So much to do, so much to see

Great world building and character development and pacing, but needs better translations in the early chapters and consistent statistics in the later chapters, skeleton hell going from 10 million to 20 million, then back to 10 million before becoming 2 milllion, at least post a chapter with army statistics per realm so we know what is a typo and what is pace fixing, overall still an amazing story and I hope it continues to be so

Very good novel must read it nice story building so far