Kaelthar: The Iron Will - Reviews

This is going to be fantastic. Its from the author of a book I read on Barnes and Nobles.

Looking forward to more.

Like all stories of this type, there are major flaws.  The problem I see is the constant reality bending nature of the system that is created.  If a system has to bend reality constantly then there is going to be millions of little changes occurring each time it does something.  Personally I think it is better for the system just to be creating items out of nothing than go the whole reality change route.  These novels can be fun for a few chapters, but those of us who like to think more deeply about things will be looking at this type of story as if there are a bunch of problems that just get more irritating as things go on.

a very good story with in depth characters,it has a lot of potential but author is not updating fast enough and the chapter length is also not too big

I really Enjoyed this book i sure hope the Author is ok and will continue with this novel  I would love to read it to the end but until more chapters come i will wait patiently ?

This review is not a part of review keep remember, although I try some new stuff but this game this is newest of all. Other the opening few errors that are also negligible when we look forward and reach next chapter, the smoothness with which story is described is something I dream of. Char and world are developing with a calculated pace and so the story.Good job author

This novel is a good read, but if I want to tell about its problems, MC gives a lot to women, while they are nothing but resource leeches, and the most dangerous thing is that he tells them his secrets. I feel threatened whenever I see a man tell his secrets to his women.  After that, MC has no purpose and is easily manipulated by his women

In a certain hall.....

"That's right ah! Meimei, what second mother said is true! Although she was once a lowly YiNiang in the Fu, but she is now our Er Niang[6]! Do not feel sad ah."

"Alright then, let's find a quiet place to set up the portal and go back home."

'But what if he is there to rescue her from her torturous life. What if he is the one person there to set things right?' Another defended.

Yooowww waaazzzuuppp mga ka-katol!!