Kaelthar: The Iron Will - Reviews

"You better hope that my usb is still intact and in the president's bureau or else YOU'll regret ti a lot . " said Aria and closed the door behind her in a very strong way . Ace remained home alone and half scared .

BUT IM ALSO GOING TO REGULAR EDIT THE ALREADY WRITTEN. AS I CAN'T GARENTEE THAT I WON'T MAKE MISTAKES. (as said, I'm just human like all of you)

Is this novel dropped?

They didn't know who the brutes were, but as one of them pushed the old lady and yelled at her, Maila grew furious. The doors were shut shortly after that, and they glared at the two women who grabbed them. The women's identities were a mystery, but Maila knew who they were nonetheless.

The writing is pleasant to read, the world building is also quite interesting but the update frequency is really strong I definitely recommend this book???

what a great story but it only has few chapters

Amazing story ???, please am an upcoming writer please i will really appreciate your support on my book.Title : The Runaway Moon ?

So far this story is good. But there are some improvements that can be made. Try and make chapters a bit longer. Story is getting a bit too fast paced so try and slow things down. Other than that it’s good. It had a lot of good potential