This is a story about a MC who wants to be a "King of Soldiers" but seems to know nothing about becoming a soldier. Everything about training to become a soldier seems to be surprising to the characters. If you know nothing about a soldiers training or have never read about the military you might enjoy this. It makes me think of a JP high school LN but it's a military academy instead. Not for me.
This is a treasure I found while randomly browsing the platform. If you like harem novels and MC-centric novels, read it now. My only complaint is that the romance doesn't develop much. Events unfold very quickly.
Ah yes, isekai into the creator's own game.The grammar and characters have been fleshed out nicely. Your sentence structures are for the most part great! The breaking of the 4th wall is a nice twist and its not abused too which is good. The only problem I have is the plot. What's Jason and Mo Zuo's end goals? This is his game so he knows everything about it, but what is his purpose? This could very well be explained later, but I just recommend making it clear near the beginning chapters!
In reality, they could have just replaced him. But...this was a film made specifically for Bei Chendong. So, other actors on the same level refused to pick up after him.
The horn was an alarm, announcing the large-scale escape of slaves. The clatter and crash of the portcullis in the gatehouse confirmed the sound; they were sealing the district to protect the rest of the city.
Its my turn against a girl with large hands and a wide face, we get ready, set, and start running, I start to run as fast as I can, while the girl is leaping like a frog, "5.58 seconds" "5.89 seconds
Walking over to the kid I picked him up and quickly ran to the nearest hospital. The nurse told me he would be okay the girl will wake up by next morning.