It’s not even my second life! - Reviews

Enjoying every second of this book

In chapter 151, Mc killed a innocent Mother that has seen her son (who has a evil Aura according to Mc) be killed before her and began to cure Mc out of sadness and anger, something that a normal mother would to do.I sincerely hope the same thing happen to the Author sincerely he mad Mc so unreasonable??

Another utterly braindead barely human mongoloid gets an utterly broken system.He should of just stayed dead with this lukewarm IQ.                              

Very short story. Most likely the author started with the idea of a reincarnated with a system storyline but the story fails to take off. At least he did a good job of finishing it.

petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................

Same clinche poor Mc's family, struggling mc and his sister. Mc tries to give his sister a good life. But I got enough with it.The starting of the story is so boring. You could have cut that part but you still made the tragic story that was not logical for me.Sorry, I don't want to know further.

Author are you ever going to continue writing chapters for the Magical System also The guardian system Trader. .............................

well story is ok and I have read 6 or 7 chapter and I have read a comment on faloo and from the chapter the daughter is actually not from future or something it's just the female lead's twin sister who act like future daughter in front of him and well talks to him ,though system is real

just reading the description made me wanna read it jajaja, tough that "dragon sword" i was imagining "her" growing a rod jajajaja that would have been fun, a futa MC ????

I genuinely don't think I can give this story enough praise. It's truly a shame that the author died, as it's one of my favourite fantasy novels of all time.Writing Quality - Flawless. As in, throughout the 419 chapters, I don't think that I found a single flaw.Stability of Updates - I just put this down as 5* because I remember the story having good update stability until a couple updates before the "end".Story Development - The story in the beginning is meh, but it eventually it becomes amazing. As much as I love this novel- to the point of having read it 5 times now- It's really not the best. It's still not bad, mind you, and I would never say it's boring or unreadable, but it's significantly worse than every other category. After the initial period of getting tossed around like a ragdoll by powers far beyond his means, the story is downright amazing, though. It's a simple Hero's Journey, but perfected and devoid of any of the gimmicks and lazy tricks of other similar story.Character Design - Good. Arran is a simple man. He has average talent for magic, he has average talent for using a sword, and he has average talent for insights. His only real talent is fighting. To say that he is a natural at killing people would be an understatement. And he's not the type to feel morally conflicted about it either. The other characters are also relatively simple. Despite this, I can't really call any of them bad. It's just good, basic character design, to go along with the good, basic story.World Background - Amazing. It's unfortunately never plumbed to its truest depths, but there are plenty of hints of threats that lie beyond the veil of secrecy. Every time I reread this, I can't help but feel like there's so much left untold about the world.I really can't express how sad I am that this story will never be finished. It's truly an amazing piece of writing, and I wish that he had at least uploaded his notes on the story and world somewhere. It takes everything I love about simple high fantasy and puts it all into one neat, simple package. It truly belongs in the hall of fame of fantasy webnovels, alongside the likes of The Wandering Inn and Mother of Learning.

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