It’s not even my second life! - Reviews

Imma just go ahead and leave a review even though there arent many chapters. So far this is pretty good, I like the gacha system and the grammar is pretty clean. I do like how the MC is working towards the core formation realm and then setting up a sect. He isnt given a run down sect nor a cultivation base at the beginning. I dont mind that he drew a rare cultivation method which alloes him to level up faster because it was his first draw and those draws are always luckier than others. Anyways, thanks for taking the time to write this novel Author. ?

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I broke into tears and cried loudly. I cursed myself. I was not intended to hit her. I just wanted to kidnap her and bring her to my place so I could explain everything to her. I had known her, in normal circumstances, she would never listen what I wanted to say. She is stubborn. So I have to do so but due to my carelessness, she is in coma. Never ever in my worst nightmare I would have done this, then why I did so.. I have loved her. I have done so many terrible things but only one thing I have done right and that is to love her and now look what I have done now.

Even after cutting me off and posing a question, Mr. Broadway didn't look back at me. He continued to walk like he believed I'd follow him.

Just as she braced herself to embrace the cool arms of death, the pressure subsided as the words,

A growl rumbled in his chest as her arousal scent hit him. Moving her auburn hair aside, he began with soft kisses on her neck. His hands slid around her, pulling her to him closer.

"don't you know of this thing we humans do called knocking?

Immediately, a waiter entered the room with eight large glasses of beer and placed them on the table.

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What? This doesn't have any reviews yet? ?So far it's really good. The writing is interesting and I like the characters. Thank you

i love raye's character, and the plot is really interesting :3 i can't wait to see how the story will develop in the future.