Immortality Begins as an Alchemy Master - Reviews

Good novel. Nice plot and an exciting story. Good job author

this book is literally the worst awespec novel written....the main character is only alive because of plot amor...the villains make stupid choices despite being in high levels of cultivation (and the list goes on) this book is a waste of time?

It's a great Naruto fanfiction!!It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translation..I think I already read this story before, and it already finished/ending.. But I still like to read this story..I like this kind of story.. And I can say that this story is one of my favourites Naruto fanfiction..Please continue this story until finished ??Love your story.. Keep up the great work author san ?????

This is the perfect Slice Of Life.There are some dumb people who think the novel has to be done everything new. But Slice Of Life is cliches placed together. And the Author write the novel in a way that make these cliches look awesome!If you are looking for something with a slow pace and amazing characters, this is the novel for you!The characters have profundity and resemble anime characters.There are no FaceSlapping or Nationalism.So don’t worry about reading these boring stuff.

if possible, make the mc have a steadier or calm character.you can also make it the character to be funnier.the character the mc displays is a little worrying, you can't allow him to be courting death all the time right?he is to egoistic, arrogant....This is just my advice, I also hope your novel gets picked

I like the story......................................................................................................................................

MC is too passive.  He no life’ a game for 10 years then when the game world merged with the real world, he became the strongest in the world.  Only he went back to the menial joke he worked instead of planning for the day when raid bosses starts to appear.   Meanwhile, the world is falling apart because the law can’t be enforced on evil immortals and the appearance of raid bosses that are on his level.  All the problems he faces are due to his own inaction early on, only to end up having to solve it later.

Shameless 5 star author review!!!!!  Glad you were able to stop by and take a look at this book! I take my inspiration from the Legendary Mechanic and The Strongest Sword God.  Both of these books kept me up all night for weeks on end and now I'm getting revenge by making a book that will do the same!!!! Muahahaha.Seriously though, expect intense action and world building on two ends, both I. Socrathia and on Earth.  Our MC may have the knowledge of the future but that's not going to make things easy for him.I will do my best to add the reviewers and commentators thoughts into the book, and let's explore this VRMMORPG and post apocalyptic world together!!!!

It’s awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeererreeeeeeee .................................................,............,............,.,..::::::::::::::

I enter the class and I saw that many students have returned from break already,though the period was not over, all eyes fall on me as I marched bare footed with the food in my hands toward my seat and I sat down in fear staring at Isabella.she focus all her attention on a book she was reading,i took a quick glance at the cover of the book and I discover it's a book titled "Against the nation (the cause for war".she was so engrossed in the book and I stare at her with mixed affection.I was dun scared by mere seeing her beautiful face ,why will a beautiful girl be fill with mischief I ask myself the second time in less than 72 hours .i was still thinking hard with the nylon in my mind when she drifted me off my thought with a shocking word.

At least for a few seconds, his mind started to aimlessly wander as his eyes darted around the room. Showing a face that did not know if it was laughing or crying, he unconsciously moved past the little stone altar, and had moved even further than before.