Immortality Begins as an Alchemy Master

Good novel. Nice plot and an exciting story. Good job author

this book is literally the worst awespec novel written....the main character is only alive because of plot amor...the villains make stupid choices despite being in high levels of cultivation (and the list goes on) this book is a waste of time?

It's a great Naruto fanfiction!!It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translation..I think I already read this story before, and it already finished/ending.. But I still like to read this story..I like this kind of story.. And I can say that this story is one of my favourites Naruto fanfiction..Please continue this story until finished ??Love your story.. Keep up the great work author san ?????

This is the perfect Slice Of Life.There are some dumb people who think the novel has to be done everything new. But Slice Of Life is cliches placed together. And the Author write the novel in a way that make these cliches look awesome!If you are looking for something with a slow pace and amazing characters, this is the novel for you!The characters have profundity and resemble anime characters.There are no FaceSlapping or Nationalism.So don’t worry about reading these boring stuff.

if possible, make the mc have a steadier or calm character.you can also make it the character to be funnier.the character the mc displays is a little worrying, you can't allow him to be courting death all the time right?he is to egoistic, arrogant....This is just my advice, I also hope your novel gets picked

I like the story......................................................................................................................................