I am not a picky reader, I suck at English, so I am not really gonna comment on the grammar mistakes. Overall, this book has great potential the plot is great and it avoids most cliches from what I've read the character development is also good, but there is little to no dialog the you can see the character development but we never really see the developments being put into action. I truly like this book, but it's hard to read when it sounds like a documentary. I am going to drop this for now, but I'll pick this back up and hopefully see some changes in future chapters.
