I'm the protagonist, yet the girls can hear the villain's inner voice - Reviews

So far so gud. I've almost caught up with the latest chap uwu really enjoying it. Raiden is quite an interesting character, my personal favorite. The best thing I like about him is that he doesn't flush the toilet :)

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I had read a few chapter, dozens of it... And I had to say, I kind of miss the old style of game world based novel... Now, it just feel complicated and had alot of stuff that should be simple but being describe in confusing manner.. But maybe it just me who can't keep up with this new style..

this is going to be my first review after checking out 3 chapters of the story. so far pretty good we expect the typical vr gaming background if you have read one before. i just dont like the mc character pretty coward . he got this old classmates bullies for some reason he is afraid of them and my imagine is running wild because a normal guy would only be afraid of physical bullying since base on my opinion and info i have read so far, he is someone who does not care about social life. somewhat of a recluse quiet child .If  i were the mc i should at least try to do some self defense he is 5 feet 9! if i am going to bully him as a 5 6 when i was 14 years old back then i will at least think twice regardless of his physical type. the bully trope is getting old now a days since we know that typical quiet child is not afraid to pull a trigger to kill his classmates like in america hahahah. i want to see our 5 9 mc grow some backbone if he is being physically intimdiated because as i mention i dont see the mc getting affected by words or insult to have that kind trauma. so i say it is pretty unrealistic to me as a common citizenso far very good introduction. i think i need to read more  chapters before updating this review but it at least got me hookup and the story is interesting.

si buscas Mc que no tenga opinion ni tome decisiones, actitud y personalidad demasiado promedio mas para el lado patetico , mayores que le digan que hacer y lo manejen como marioneta y el solo acepte todo al igual que las mujeres lo manejan como quieren ..esta es tu novela

After chapter 136. Well, the pace accelerated and is too fast in my opinion, no side arcs and almost no breath in-between (there is but it's skipped in one line and then comes next action). Story is simple so far, somewhat gets repetitive as MC does same routine every cultivation realm (gathering techniques of same realm, upgrading on steroids, then finding his path closed and finding a new one where he will be first given a technique of higher realm).MC finds higher cultivation realms powerful, but once he reaches them, he's like ,,that's it? this is nowhere enough". He can merge techniques like in Way of the Devil. The background sounds similar to some sorcerer novels.. was it A Sorcerer's Journey, where they teleported their whole world to some distant place or another one? Or was it maybe Legendary Mechanic (as well)? Don't remember. Also MTL translated one of the empires as "speaking english".. only once though, sigh.Is this novel good? I think it's above average, but there doesn't seem to be much depth contrary of what I'd expect of a sci-fi novel such as this one. It's readable, MC isn't an idiot. But there are some plot holes, the pace is rushed.

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Beautiful! Beautiful characters, Beautiful structurization of the game and Beautiful start! I'm waiting for more! And a prise to the admins XD

Great story and no grammar mistakes so far, hope it keeps in the same pace. So far the writing quality feels nice, long time I dont see a funny book like this one. also, nice cover haha