I N N O C E N T - Reviews

You want nationalism, you got it.You want fine translation quality to be the best part of a novel, you got it.You want a decent premise to fall flat almost immediately, you got it.This novel has everything!!

Ok here my honest review at reading up to 338 chaptersAm honestly not good at reviewing but I try my best at this one (others should take a considerable at reviewing if they don't like this novel other just post 3 star short review without even explaining more(my English sucks?ok!)WQ:am expert at reading but not writing in English so i get this @ 4.0 for the style of your writing is kinda bland from 3rd perspective giving me the feels that it's not enoughSOU:Got no problem with this, just don't push yourself to release a chapter in rush for a greater storySD:for reading many ching ching novels I like to say that I love this one I don't complain about the mc apst for being a trauma boy ok and so far the story is progressing rapidly for me and make me think that the chaos is just a small part of the superpower in myriads realms like there something more big coming than the great war and wangling another past self?or just a metaphor for the chaos self??CD:okokok am sucks at reviewing so lets get this done already I like the mc not a cocky**** and the mc stop being a paranoid in the latest chapter and for the enemy oh shit I forget the others and for the others? while......just keep improving your character development am no good at this Ok so next isWB:am feeling that there more than the chaos, heaven,hell,realms Am not surprised there even a abyss demons so why not created more realms or universes!!!if there is more powerful than gods thenOk here's my review good luck at reading this??@lso if others read this and want to leave a bad review too pls just fucking explained why with more depth in it! You ruined the author effort

This is the first novel i have ever read in which MC is stronger than the system...____________________________________________________________________________

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I have never heard of a book like this before! This teenage girl is so dedicated to her foster brothers and sisters that she's willing to do anything for them to make sure that they have everything that they need, and she's just a kid herself. She's finally found a guy who seems to recognize how special she is, but will they make it work? I keep reading chapters to find out. Can't wait for more to be released!

Author here! Another shameless review ;)Hopefully I can live up to my own set of high expectations. I would love to write more and will continue to work on this novel arduously. I also have another novel that I will be posting updates for on my Pateorn account. It is about half way done.https://***.patreon.com/kalrock

He came to a sudden halt as he entered his bathroom and noticed he had acquired a set of foxy accessories, a pair of red fox ears and a tail gently swinging out behind, while his whiskers stood out as actual stiff hairs instead of the facial lines they'd always been before.

Lumapit naman siya kay Paulite. Sinisigurong, wala itong bibitawan na kakaibang salita. Gusto niya ng katahimikan. Nagpapasalamat din siyang hindi nagtanong ang dalawa niyang kasama sa kanilang byahe.

{RPG System Initalizing}

"If you think because you are all the way up there or those two up on the second floor are going to save you," Ichigo said causing her eyes to widen. "You got a whole other thing coming," he said as he flash-stepped towards her at full speed leaving an afterimage behind. The next thing the little girl felt was wind blow through her hair before the Ichigo she was looking at started to disappear as though he was an illusion causing her eyes to widen in panic.

"Umm? Six I think?" She said unsure. She looked left then right ahead of them. "They are all up on that cliff side!" She said point upwards. They followed her gaze finding several figures stood up top. "And that one-" She froze shaking slightly. "They're the strongest." She looked scared but calmed down when Jack placed a hand on her shoulder.

Name: Drake