I N N O C E N T - Reviews

While he was on the rooftop, he saw that some people behind him we're going to enter the rooftop, he then just went to sit on the ledge of the small storage room and lays down and then some just shouted at him saying "Hey, you there, what are you doing here?" Ryan then just appeared in front of him and then punched his face then the bell rang and he went to the next class which was gym. In gym, he saw that the guy who he punched was there also so that guy came towards him and asked Ryan for a Spar so they just went to their positions and took there stances as the gym teacher said" start!!

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yes am pregnant with your baby she said and faced her father, dad for the last time am telling that I won't get rid of this baby, you can't decide whether I keep it or not, it's my life,

Anyways, enough about my new parents and more about how I'm doing

After he entered the training ground, William walked in a place that he can call ' a small forest '. This place is not too big, but nor too small. Certainly, the most perfect place to practice.

I decided to skip past some things cause I lost where I was, but I am continuing the story. I've changed some things as well, as I don't want to interfere to much in the story line of the games.

Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running

When the timer hit zero seconds, all screens were forcefully closed and he felt a tugging from behind. Axel fell on his back and was pulled through the floor. He fell through the familiar black void and watched as the white cube shrink smaller and smaller in his vision.

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