I am a Guide Who Killed an Esper. - Reviews

OP system which probably would allow MC to grow whole realm up to platinum. Story is pretty boring as well as a bit stupid. Characters aren't very special. I don't really understand high rating of this novel.

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Overall, this novel is pretty great, I can't say the Grammer or English is the best, since there is things such as "Self made

Wonderful novel! skhfjdgfdjgdgdhfskhfjdgfdjlgjh I'm obsessed. XD Hye Su seems fishy. I wonder what she's up to. 0-0 Looking forward to more!

I don't like reading this genre so I don't undersrand why I am so hook reading this!So beautifully written and so very interesting! Can't stop reading the moment I open it!

I shall be honest this was difficult to actually read due to the grammar errors but as that was already covered I shall move on. Whilst I am no writer myself I shall give you some of my thoughts. Try to be more consistent with numbers you start with mid 2500-2627 then you state the exact range 2580-2627 (which is late 2500's not middle). Also use the units of measure for example years. " and it was technology from 2600." could be and it was technology from the year 2600. or it was technology from the 27th century. It helps clarify when you have multiple unit types. examples are stats, damage or time.To help with grammar you could try "Grammarly" I have not used it myself but its supposed to be free so at worst you decide it doesn't suit you. Let me know if this helped ill check it again in a few days and see how the story is going.

A bit slow and kinda unclear but interesting...

As we walked past, I gazed with some pity upon the man who believed sincerely that we were the holy knights who saved the city from a wicked necromancer a year ago.

They have to go back and forth from the village to the hunting ground so they waste a lot of time there. And the material price also not that expensive so they sacrifice a bit more money for more experience. Granted they already more equipped than us so it's not that much sacrifice.

Nevertheless, a certain third prince was not a high ranked Martial Supreme in name only. The moment he came to Celes' location, he sensed her spiritual Qi thus increased the pressure. A smile drew his lips upwards, pretending as if he was still looking despite having found her in just a matter of seconds. 'A little revenge shouldn't hurt,' he thought.

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Winter wood is the only one who had ever said those words to me. So why did winter River say them.