Heavens Devouring Emperor - Reviews

The author has a creative mind. Editing and proofreading would clear away distractions for readers.

Important notice!!!

I'm Asian who is trying to write in English. There will be mistakes and errors. So bear with me. If you see mistakes, let me know please.

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The story seems fine. However, despite my vast experience reading poorly translated/trash novels, I could barely make sense of what was going on.

It is an awesome novel I couldn't find anything wrong with the novel Character development ,world background etc is perfect I hope author will continue with the great work

Over all 4.5 /5
The story line is well written and it develops accordingly. Although it's a little bit early.
The grammarbis fair enough.
The character's are fine.
The world background is well designed.
And the update rate is excellent so far.

ok let me start by saying I like the idea and the fact there is not too much cliche that's a plus for me but the negative of this book is the fact that I can barely understand what is going on I seriously recommend getting an editor I tried reading it but it was tough like reading a mtl. so my review or constructive criticism is get an editor you need one bad but other than that I enjoyed the book

Get ready to have a stroke reading this. It's full of grammatical errors and typos.

This story has so much potential and is interesting. Every character is flushed out nicely. I have high hopes for author to continue this masterpiece [img=recommend]

At the time of this writing, I am at chapter 8. So far, I am really enjoying it! The world it takes place in is not just our world in the future, which helps to keep things interesting. I'm more excited for the things to come at this point. The story sets up a lot of exciting future narrative plot points and ideas that I'm excited to see explored further! I would definitely reccomend giving this one a shot!

Great novel. Have fun reading it. The author has done a good job as you wont find many mistakes while reading it. Theres a room for improvement though with the quality. I understand the author is Asian and not very good in English nonetheless. Good work.

The characters so far have all been interesting, fun and engaging. The updates have been regular. Story in intriguing and has been developing well so far keeping me interested in what's to come.
Only reason I didn't give the world 5 stars is just that there hasn't been enough time to flesh it out yet meaning so far it's been good, but not enough to say if it will become amazing, just stay good or become less good. Definitely interested in learning more about the world though.

Although I am too late, I wish that you win your WPC contest and take away the gold prize. I am your new reader and this novel was my first. I have to say that I am more than impressed. So I will be going to read your other novels. Good Luck and congrats in advance.