He doesn't want me - Reviews

I really thought that as the story progressed the MC would make some better decisions or maybe abandon them, but it didn't stay that simple.

This is actually trash. 15 chaps in I was really hoping that the story would turn better, but no the same old cliche and story plot that has been used thousands of times. The amount of filler used is also unbelievable. Chap.15 was practically filler and the plot moved so slow. The level of cringe I felt was actually uncomfortable that can physically be felt. Is the standards of books dropping nowadays or something??? I would understand it may be interesting to newcomers, but for people like me who read all the time it becomes sickening to see the same line of thought used in the plot over and over and over again. Utterly disappointed.

This was a good story until his ''father and mother'' come and help with the rebirth lily. Absolute trash. Like they leave him for idk how long and suddenly oh were your parents we abandoned you when you were 7 and now that you are half spet immortal we have come again. The audacity of those fucks.TLDR:if you want to read this **** do it.

This is my second review after a month with over 100 chapters.Writing a hundred chapters in a month is quite hard but thankfully, I pulled it off. Now, I don't want to talk too much on why you should read this story. But, there are some things that I would like to highlight.You will get antagonists but you won't get many devilish, evil villains. There will many challengers that keeps on improving at the same pace as the main character.It is a novel with three core tropes; Dual Cultivation, Devil Cultivation and Sword Cultivation.Dual Cultivation- You will find it constantly in the story and with different kinds of female. Remember, everything is just a fiction so I will be writing anything I want to no matter how absurd it might be.Devil Cultivation- It takes off a slow start but it has a bigger plot in it. And if you read the book properly you will find why.Sword Cultivation- It is the main focus of the story and the main plot where the story revolves.And, there are some mysteries for many readers regarding some characters, some events, some places, so please calm down and if you don't understand anything, just wait for future chapters.The writing quality is not too good but not too bad either. Updates stability is something I will try to keep up with 3 chapters per day.Story Development will be on focus when the world background expands. As for the character design, I believe you can understand more on them after reading like literally hundreds of chapters. Because, each one of them has a certain goal, certain motivation and certain personality. Give the free chapters a try in free time and if you like it, continue, if you don't then you can drop it.

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Great job with the novel GREATJOBWill mc carry hundreds of books in his underpants when ever is doing something Author did something unbelievable even in a fantasy novelDuck who goes to battle carrying hundreds of booksDuh! Our mc does This is **** but five star for you think some alternative on this or I will hunt you down and make you change this period

The new horizons are amazing. Please give more details of the new world and these groovy fluffy kids. I don't have enough game elements. The story is looking more and more like a good sci-fi adventure book.

there cant be any story here,,,,,,,this is vegeta...his weakest form could destroy a planet, and  if he is neutered, then whats the point?...he isnt a saiyan or vegeta..........author man,,,,dont give some cool pro to MC with understanding it

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Hiya! Attached is a breakdown of my review: Writing Quality 4/5: Noticed a few grammar errors here and there, some that I commented on, some that I didn't. I think some (like the missing period) should be catchable after a few proofreads. Update Stability 5/5: Not much to comment on there. Honestly the length of the chapters are super impressive. Story Development 4/5: I think you're aware of the issue since I noticed you mentioning this in the author's comments. I think it might be because I don't really read ML novels that much, but the first few chaps made me feel a bit overwhelmed. Especially with all the names being tossed around, some parts took a few rereads for me to get a grasp on what was happening. Character Design 5/5: Seems super detailed so far!World Background 5/5: This category took my breath away! The first few paragraphs describing the world literally gave me chills ahahaha. Your descriptions are probably your greatest strength, so I would say try to couple that with the action and the info a bit more so that there's more of a balance. Overall super good moods you set! Like it definitely matched what I expected after seeing your cover lel

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