He doesn't want me - Reviews

The headmaster hugged Gray and Gray reciprocated. Today was his last day as a normal human being, as from that day on he would be a Walker

"Thirty-one ka na. Dapat ka nang maghanap ng mapapangasawa." Tukso nito sa kanya.

"Something has been bugging you for a while but you won't tell what."

Loki let out a sigh as he looked down at his Rykar, who was exaggeratingly snoring as saliva trickled down his lip. "Dumbass. Ok, stop messing around. How did it actually go?"

"And I am in class Vlll-C. Would you like to drink hot chocolate with marshmallows. That's what I get everytime I come. It's my favorite. "

Well, the years start coming and they don't stop coming

So much to do, so much to see

`Speak only for yourself,´ Alucard replied with a smirk.

The story has potential, i like it. Waiting for more chapters ?

Good start, not super original, but promising. The only complaint is the quality of the translation. It feels like MTL posted raw, no human editing. Too many mix-ups in gender pronouns, female characters routinely get referred to as "he

I'll finally give myself 5 stars, like other authors do.Why am I writing this now? To inform you about my, at first, inconsistent writing style. Initially, I used my work as a progression tracker, but now I feel some connection with it.Really, I wanted to improve my writing with this being a 'side project', and it is visible each chapter.Spacing, vocab, logic, character development, and, mainly, the thoughts and feelings deepness — everything improves steadily, at some point I dare to say exponentially.When you start reading my work, please, bare with the pacing and, sometimes, unusual writing style. I feel the story itself evolves quite well and also develops significantly more in the future chapters.