Graeae: Land of beauty and nightmares - Reviews

To be honest ...the flow of the story seemed fast yet at a good pace. There are some words here and there that are misspelled and some words I am unfamiliar with(like Sylphear is a god I have never heard of... unlike undine or Garuda whom I am familiar with). But if I have to say...they are not a big flaw at all since this story sucked me into it so much more than I expected it to. It was a really fun read

I'm gonna be true about this review.

First the writing quality: 3
It was well performed how you described the setting and characters. However, the way you write verb scenes, such as battle scenes, is awful. Additionally, your paragraph structure was unclear.
Example:
The beast lunged in his front with its club swing. Victor ducked down under it and dashed forward faster than the eye could see. He tore off both of its legs with a single slash. The ogre fell face forward.,

The paragraph itself is fine, but the construction is awful. Additionally, if you consistently use a word like lunged, a new reader will find it unclear (which is you can just use the word hopped, leaped, or jumped)

Updating stability: 5 updates a day
Story development: 4 its good for now
Character design: 4 since the paragraph structure was bad
Worldbuilding: 5. too early to say so just support

Second shameless review!!

After writing more than a hundred chapters and being contracted, I felt I should do a review and say what I think about the book.

Q. Will there be a harem?

A. I have added multiple female leads to the story now and they all have things going on in their lives. Sophia and Marigold are traumatised and Kivela is trying to find her place in the world. Osmond also is rather young now, so I don't know.

Q. Is the book dark?

A. Yes it is. I have given warnings at the beginning of dark chapters.

Q. Will there be a system?

A. I have not added the tag because the story as of now, doesn't have a system. But I am planning to bring a character with a reincarnated character with a system in the future, so I guess I should add those tags.

Q. Writing quality?

A. I am a writer who has just started. English is not my first language. I am improving every day and with every word I write. And with that, I also have found out that my initial chapters are bad compared to the latest ones. So I am planning to go back and edit the whole thing once volume one is completed.

Q. When will volume one be completed then?

A.  It's in the last arc now. I am planning to write five volumes for this book if everything works accordingly.

Q. Chapter update?

A. I try to update one chapter a day. I am currently writing with my mobile and it is a hastle.

And finally, thank you for reading my book. You can give ratings, reviews, power stones and gifts to show your support and love.

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Even though you said this is ur first work I am at a loss because this is so good. Hope the author to keep going and give these lovely readers morr and more. lots of love ❤️

Very nice and interesting story l must say.... I also liked the way ML is... He is really cool....
Also liked the author's writting skill..... Its look like a professional...
Looking forward to the next chapters..

This book is really totally amazing and totally worth reading

one of those reader who rarely comment,but I had to for this book is a hidden gem,so definitely try it out.
cos you definitely wouldn't regret it!!!

Alright then here we go after reading 10 chaps in. The novel has a unique story with an interesting lore of the Gods, definitely a more traditional-driven fantasy but it is quite enjoyable. The dialogues of the characters and their actions shape their personalities quite well, each character is easily distinguishable from the next. However, I advise the author to use more connecting words or conjunctions. The novel doesn't seem to flow very well with single short sentences that appear detached from each other. A few minor grammar errors here and there but it does not disrupt the overall appeal of the story. But I do strongly advise to look into linking the sentences to each other as when reading, it appeared that each sentence was a new single thought that had no relation to the other. That is the only issue that is hindering the potential greatness of the novel. Overall it is a wonderful read! best of luck to the author !

Writing Quality: 89% Perfect
Story Development: 99.9% Perfect
Character Design: 99% Perfect
Updating Stability: 89% perfect
World Background: 99.9% Perfect

I can't describe how much I felt hooked to this book. It reminds me of the Giant and horror movies that I used to watch. This book really felt like I was watching a movie. And I appreciate the author's effort and commitment towards writing this book. Even if he couldn't write in a day or two, it is worth your effort. The flow of the grammar makes the storylines more attractive to read.

Hoping to see you get more popular with this book. (Annyeonghi gaseyo

A very interesting plot and story. The darkness and tragedy serves as a good motivation for the protagonist. Well written by the author.

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