The world-building is nice, and the MC is solid. Overall, the book really gives off the vibe of another land, and it pretty much captures the surrealness of that said world. Just a minor tweak though, you can lessen the paragraph division so the readers won't be encouraged to skip through the dialogues. Adding a couple more words on a sentence said by a certain character will really help with engagement... not too much though since that would bore the readers.
I tend to in the opposite spectrum where I make all my paragraphs longer... and that's a bad habit I couldn't get out of my system. You're writing style is fresh, you just have to make it smoother.
An interesting read overall, definitely sticking around for more ^_^
