Forgotten Tale - Reviews

A very very nice story. Perfect length and perfect place to stop. Charac develop was excellent and peaked at just the right moment for this novelette.

After reading everything that's translated at the moment I really have nothing, but praises. I really do hope that this gets selected so I have something to entertain myself with.

Awesome heart racing story. He’s lucky to the extreme and finally learned how truly powerful he is. I hope ot getd picked, I need to know what happens next.

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It is rather relaxing to read it without the forced propaganda or racism. Thank you.                                                      .

The setting is detailed and interesting and the story is also well written. The main issue I see is with paragraphing with some of the longer paragraphs just needing to be split up.

Everything seems so light.

[ yess host]

However I've snapped my fingers about 10 times and she is till hold on by a thread…Hmm…I wonder what I should do if she is this strong against this "level" of hypnotic temptation I have…so let's find another way to do this

His eyes darted in all directions, long abandoning his cleaning cart in a corner with the bags of trash neatly tied to the sides. All sorts of crazy plans started to brew in his mind; grab and run? Too risky, wait until she abandons it and then take it? Unlikely she never left the room without her bag on her person let alone her purse... Or maybe..

"May be they were not meant to be together. But it would be best if they were." She really liked Anaya and liked to see them together.

I huffed after speaking my mind.