It seems like you've written a detailed review of a BL (Boy's Love) novel, sharing your honest thoughts and opinions about the main characters and their actions. You express disappointment with the protagonist Feng Ming's behavior, describing him as overly self-centered and seeking constant praise. You also address the mixed reactions to the antagonist, Rong Tian, who is portrayed as abusive and has a positive ending despite his heinous act.
You emphasize that mentioning sexual assault in literature is important to raise awareness, but in this case, you argue that Rong Tian's character does not receive adequate consequences for his actions. You criticize the reviewer who downplays the significance of An He's death and the impact it had on the story, stating that it's crucial to acknowledge the severity of the abuse.
Regarding the book's rating, you give it a low score based on the plot, side characters, and world-building, despite acknowledging the genre's appeal. You also mention a specific guard character, Rong Hu, who you hold responsible for not helping An He during the assaults.
In conclusion, you stand by your honest review, understanding that everyone is entitled to their own opinion, but you believe it's important to address issues that may bother readers, even if it means not universally pleasing everyone. You end on a lighthearted note, signing off with a friendly reminder to have a nice day.
Revised version:
You know I tend to write reviews for almost every BL book, but I often question why I don't come across books with high ratings. Anyway, let's delve into this one. Honestly, Feng Ming, our main character, comes across as knowledgeable but not wise. His childlike behavior and constant need for praise grated on me – he'd whine when not praised, like a show-off in middle school. It's fine to want recognition, but it doesn't make him likable.
As for Rong Tian, the ML, the 5-star reviews seem to avoid discussing his problematic actions. He sexually assaulted An He, which is a serious issue. While acknowledging that it's essential to address such topics, it's concerning how Rong Tian still gets a happy ending without facing consequences. An He's experience can't be overlooked, especially since he was a minor.
The reviewer's comments section has caught my attention, with some justifying Rong Tian's treatment. But An He's role was significant; his death shaped the plot. Dismissing his suffering because he's the ML is unjust. Another reviewer sees the book as a subtle exploration of abuse, but romanticizing toxic relationships is not acceptable. Fictional stories, including this one, have real-life implications.
Overall, I rate this story:
1 star for the plot (it's a war tale, but it falls short),
1 star for some side characters,
1 star for world-building (it's passable).
Notably, the guard Rong Hu's inaction during An He's abuse is a major issue. His silence speaks volumes, and I can't forgive him or others who enable such mistreatment.
If my honesty offends, I apologize, but I stand by my thoughts. Everyone's taste differs, and if you enjoyed the book, that's great. But it's important to address flaws, even in fiction, as they can influence readers. Have a wonderful day, readers!