Falling in Love to Escape the Original Book Plot [BL] - Reviews

One of the best books I’ve read if it continues to develope as it has it’ll be an amazing book, you don’t see much of this genre but once it is excuted it creates an amazing storey.

YOOOO!!! What up. Its a good story. fun characters. cool powers, and fun story. I like 10/10 would recommend. it is stupidly long, but I like that as it makes it last longer. good thing to since the author seems to be in a rut and is barely posting now :(

another trash face slapping novel with an enemy who wont die so the mc can face slap him all the time, and it was even an editors picked seriously? is the taste of the editor so low

Great piece of writing. I've been reading eastern fantasy for some time now but not many as good as this one. The English is flawless, the writing is flawless too. I'm adding it to my library.

I just need the raws.......... Anyone???

I couldn't deal with the edgy dialogue. Important factors of the story were forced, like extremely forced. Some grammar issues but not the worse. My deciding factor to drop the book was the was the edgy and cringe dialogue. I wasn't didn't see it being developed into something more interesting. BUT if you don't mind the dialogue and some forced development, then you'll be fine. Wish you well author, and hope you improve.

Ok. I've read till the last chapters, here we go. First of all, WARNING TO NEW READERS:You'll have a lot of things to ignore on the first chapters. The emotes rarify themselves a lot on the latest chapters so that's one good thing, and he stops pressing enter at the end of every sentence too. So HAVE HOPE!That's the only critical flaws I found writing-wise. Story development-wise, I won't say it's the best I've ever seen, and I mean the man calls himself the trolling master so I mean yea... The POV are sometimes all over the place, and there's little things you could nitpick, but overall, I'll say it and I have pretty high standards, the story was enjoyable.Came here after reading Yggdrasil's pupil, so I knew it was gonna get better. I was right! It does get better. The carefree style of the author stays, but at least you understand what's happening, and how hilarious it is ;)The world-building makes out a pretty dark world, outlining the naïve character of the MC.Naïve, but not stupid, though! Sometimes, I was shocked by how creative the MC's plan were. He just bad at talking to people, leading to lots of misunderstandings.In short, read it ;)

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Their hearts aching with anxiety at the rapidly closing distance between the suspicious figures and the little girl, the men jumped into action. Rising up to her defense, three of them immediately drew their swords and ran towards the girl, making it so she was positioned safely behind them.

I must be dreaming.

That's what I planned but you upset me so, you have to make it  up to me.You have to accompany me to make me happy.