Falling in Love to Escape the Original Book Plot [BL] - Reviews

he leered at the bonfire,

"Who's there" He asks, as he looks around the room to find the origin of the voice.

"You basically need to just put yourself in the reader's shoes a little more and asking for critique is a good step towards that as it helps you spot things that might be obvious to you but not to other people"-S@Sman37

Wolfgang didn't need to hear more. And although he couldn't comprehend how a young eunuch ( that probably wasn't a eunuch) managed to convince the Holy Empress to cancel the Holy Emperor's decree and return his daughter to him, he still was grateful.

I need to get myself away from this place

Well the years start coming and they don't stop coming

I will never update this again, along with my other books.

Pretty good story and I like where it has it gone.                                                                                                            

This book is really good and I enjoy the fact that it is a Nigerian theme book.

Synopsis is clearly AI generated. ?Story us good tho, for now.

I hope you keep this going. You're doing well

This is really a solid novel and a very unique interpretation of a System as a whole. The novel doesn't have some sort of linear Level Ups at all, its straight up copy of danmachi leveling without the statestics part. So Mc needs to do feats to grow and unlock more of his DLC powers. Mc is a child so expect slow progression with romance and harem, while you can clearly see who will be harem members with the way mc and his interaction with others are portrayed in the chapters.The scope of the verse and power level is ludacrisly high without using excessive power scaling jargon names you often find in other power fantasy novels. This is not that type of novel. The scope of the verse itself seems very secondary as mc's main motive is just to become a harem protagonist, thats all.