Embodied Hearts - Reviews

nice book..... love to read more

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I like it. You should try to use x2 or  something when he kill stuff  instead of writing the same stuff  again and again????????????

Please continue, so far Im loving the idea, how you made Fresh, and Im honestly exited at what he will dk next, will he be good or bad, just explore and do nothing? Or meaby find so.e big secret about AUs? Also wondering what would happen if he meets any Gasters or other characters like flowery or chara. Overall, amazing, must read, trust me, I too was skeptical at first, thinking whether this was good or bad, but now having read it I can confidently say that it is amazing with a great original plot forming. Keep up the good work author.

Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.

good job author can't wait ,let the rise begin !!

"What would life be like if a stayed a girl?"

"Can you do it, or can you not?" Arturia pressed. She needed her sword to fight, and the dull end to knock some sense into her family's heads. It would be little tap over the head, just enough to knock them unconscious until she could decide on a further course of action.

In the centre of the academy was a tall tower around 100 square meters large. Vice headmaster Shang Baien was currently respectfully standing in the centre of a room on the top of the tower. In front of him sat Kargath Academy's headmaster, lazily sitting in front of the office desk, with a smiling expression. His profound gaze also had hints of happiness and excitement reflected in them.

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