Eclipse Sovereign:Blade of the Abyss - Reviews

The quality of writing is quite low, it almost seems as if the author doesn't read the chapters through for mistakes. There are probably 5-10 mistakes in a half page chapter..The chapters are very short and only contain one scene (almost) but with frequent releases.The story processes way too fast and doesn't really have a depth. It makes reading it very shallow.The other also forgets/neglects to explain many things until after the MC has put it to use. You don't get to learn why and how the MC knows the different things.Also the MC starts of with a personality of a 16-20 year old in the body of a 7 year old... it's just plain stupid and lazy writing of the author in my opinion.The characters are dull and already after a few chapters, it becomes apparent that they are fillers, even the family of the MC.The story probably had a lot of potential, but the author needs to develop a better beginning and background before I'd give the story another look.

what I mad about this novel is the way MC act without thinking about the consequences of playing with the butterfly effect and the way that he cultivate doesn't get any struggle like the real wuxia novel.

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Writing Quality five starStability of Updates five starStory Development five starCharacter Design five starWorld Background five star........

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Very good series! I enjoyed reading it, and I expected it to honestly be cliche but boy was I wrong. This is one of my favorite novels out of your others. good pacing, very well written and good comedy lol

Mika Elbar's adventure in this magical tale breaks away from typical hero stories. His down-to-earth nature makes him a likable main character, and the mysterious systen adds suspense to the plot. The famous magic academy, Loogam, adds excitement to Mika's journey. The fact that he lacks typical magical abilities or legendary relics makes his underdog story more compelling.Pretty good start to the story. Let's go Aspiring Mangakas community!

Frey told him about how he stumbled upon the missing underworlder's car and what went on from there. "The one who drove a car was a normal human but I felt a strange aura around the human. I managed to take a good look at it when I activated my ability."

The red line is getting fainter.  I slow down.  "Why is that getting fainter?"  I whisper.

He said we would be free.

"My services aren't that cheap. Or bad."

Hinata bowed her head solemnly before she spoke, not raising it once as she talked. "Hai, Kurenai-sensei, my n-name is Hyuuga H-Hinata. I use the Jyuuken, the H-Hyuuga t-t-taijutsu form, but I'm not very good at it. I like c-cinnamon rolls, pressing flowers, spending t-time in my garden and the people I know I can trust. I dislike those who judge people before they know them, those who look down on others because they simply can and those who interfere where they shouldn't. My goal is to become str-stronger so I can ch-change the Hyuuga clan for the better, but I'm a long way from that happening. My dream is to...work up the c-courage to tell s-s-s-s-some-someone...something."