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From what I read so far I like the story development and the way some of the characters interaction. The writing itself could use some proof reading or better grammar corrections since there are a lot of wrong tense usage. It’s a very relaxing read. Thank you for writing. Keep it up!
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This is one of the stories that I've read with great plotline, characters, writing style, and flow. I really like the little details added, those metaphors, and the characterization. It's very nice to read.
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