DO YOU TRUST ME? - Reviews

Wow! I love it! Please continue the story. I like mystery novels. I would sure follow this one. I just noticed the dialogue of each character should be properly separated. But over all, nice writing and the plot is interesting.

ok... it seems like an interesting story and the tension builds up real quick, there are too little chapters right now to give a concise decision about the story. The characters seem interesting though...honestly, I kinda feel they were too quick to blame the FL for the murder but after switching perspectives, it seemed more legitimate. Overall the story has potential. So do check it out.

It seems interesting. Just build up on the scenes before moving to the next one. This makes the book more full of suspense and scene that can make the plot more detailed.

*inhale* This book is good, especially with people who likes faster books. (maybe a little too fast? The Mc is theown at you right away, I guess for conveinence. I understand that you will develop the character, through the book. Try showing not just telling us who bshe is.) If you care a lot about story and and mysteries, go ahead, you'll love this book.It is a really good book, and for a person who doesn't really like this genre of books, I'm adding it to my library easily.

Only two chapters and yet one can still tell how much thought has been put in this story. The plot is suspenseful and nail-biting! I personally am addicted to this thriller and mystery genre so I'm no doubt addicted. The main character really draws me towards the background as well! I hope you publish more chapters soon!

I don’t like romance nor female lead, although it seems you have male lead too (unless I read that wrong).
Your story has potential and interesting, especially since you have a mystery aspect to it. The mystery is what brings people into the story.
You have grammar mistakes, especially a lot of places that need commas. Remember, commas make a difference and the story flow better. Without the commas, it is like everything is together.
Other than that, your story has potential, keep up the good work!

I love it!  By the end of the second chapter I had my first hypothesis nulled hahaha.  so I'm excited to know more about them.  More chapters please. Highly recommend! At first I was quite dubious in reading this novel because of the theme.  As I am writing fluffy romance I tend to stay away from dark (gory) themes because it tends to rub on me, but hey, this one's goooood!!! The murder was just stated in passing (not graphic) so I'm fine haha. and it makes me think like a detective. really love it.  I'll be watching this novel for updates.

The story was great, the people's in the story and the background is good but do take note that some of your writing is a little off, but the rest is good.

Highly recommended ✓
I'm honestly invested in this book already. The concept and the plotline feels me up with curiosity! The character seriously is about to experience a rollercoaster ride and I'm waiting to know more about the suspense that is to come. Looking forward to the next chapters. Fighting Author!

So far, pretty good. Quality is decent, though it could use with a quick edit. Very fact-paced, and makes the readers want to know what happens next. Keep writing author!

Very quick paced, draws you in with action.  Sometimes the sentences are a little long, so make sure to take your time reading them.  The characters are realistic and intriguing.  Can't wait to read more!

I like the way you start your book and so far it seems like an interesting plot. One thing to take note of is to check the punctuations of some of your sentences. Some of them should be split up in smaller ones and others would need some commas. Aside from that, the writing quality is good. I can't say much else as you only have two chapters so far, but I'll keep on reading when you update more. Keep up the good work, author!